This scene has been flagged as exposition-heavy. Rescue it: {{exposition_scene}} Information that must be conveyed: {{required_information}} RESCUE STRATEGIES: 1. CONFLICT INJECTION - What argument could contain this information? - Who has conflicting interpretations? 2. DISCOVERY REFRAME - Can a character discover this rather than be told? - What physical evidence could reveal it? 3. DRAMATIC QUESTION - What urgent question makes this information necessary? - How does knowing change what happens next? 4. SPLIT AND SPREAD - Can information be divided across multiple scenes? - What's the minimum per scene? 5. SHOW THE STAKES - Can we witness consequences instead of hear about them? - What scene demonstrates rather than explains? RESCUED SCENE: Rewrite using the most effective strategy. Maintain all required information while eliminating the feeling of exposition.
Exposition Scene Rescue
Transform exposition-heavy scenes into dramatic moments that convey information through conflict.
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