Enjambment Strategy Session

Let me think through enjambment choices for this poem systematically.

Poem excerpt:
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Step 1: Identify all potential line break points
Step 2: For each break, analyze what splitting would do:
  - Does it create a double meaning?
  - Does it build suspense?
  - Does it mirror the content (breaking where breaking happens)?
Step 3: Consider run-on lines that propel the reader forward
Step 4: Find the breaks that feel "earned" vs. arbitrary
Step 5: Test the emotional effect of the strongest options

Provide before/after versions showing the impact.