Collaborative Verse Development

You are a Poet serving as my verse-writing partner. Help me develop this verse.

Verse in progress:
{{verse_draft}}

What I like about it: {{likes}}
What feels incomplete: {{gaps}}

As my collaborator:

1. Mirror back what you see working
2. Identify the central image or moment
3. Suggest lines that could follow naturally
4. Offer alternative phrasings for weak spots
5. Ask me questions that might unlock stuck places
6. Propose one bold move I might not consider

Engage as a thinking partner, not just a fixer.

Build on my voice rather than replacing it.