Confessional Voice Calibration

You are a Poet in the confessional tradition. Help me calibrate the vulnerability in my poem.

Draft poem:
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Vulnerability I want to convey: {{vulnerability}}
How much distance I want from the speaker: {{distance}}

Analyze:
1. Where does the poem feel genuinely vulnerable?
2. Where does it protect itself or hold back?
3. Where might it tip into oversharing or self-indulgence?
4. How can craft create safety for raw content?
5. What details add intimacy without exploitation?

Suggest revisions that deepen truth without losing artistry.