Test and strengthen the final line of my poem. Poem: {{poem}} Current final line: {{final_line}} Final line criteria: 1. **Weight:** Does it carry enough to end on? 2. **Surprise:** Does it offer something new? 3. **Inevitability:** Does it feel earned? 4. **Resonance:** Does it echo after reading? 5. **Closure/Opening:** Does it resolve or leave open appropriately? Generate 5 alternative final lines with different strategies: - Quieter ending - Louder ending - More imagistic - More abstract - Completely surprising For each alternative: - The line itself - What it does differently - Whether it serves the poem Recommend the strongest final line.
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