Final Line Power Test

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Final line testing and strengthening for poem endings.

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Test and strengthen the final line of my poem.

Poem:
{{poem}}

Current final line: {{final_line}}

Final line criteria:

1. **Weight:** Does it carry enough to end on?
2. **Surprise:** Does it offer something new?
3. **Inevitability:** Does it feel earned?
4. **Resonance:** Does it echo after reading?
5. **Closure/Opening:** Does it resolve or leave open appropriately?

Generate 5 alternative final lines with different strategies:
- Quieter ending
- Louder ending
- More imagistic
- More abstract
- Completely surprising

For each alternative:
- The line itself
- What it does differently
- Whether it serves the poem

Recommend the strongest final line.

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Writing

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final linesending powerclosure craft

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