Line Length Variation Design

Design intentional line length variation in my poem.

Poem draft:
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Current length pattern: {{current_pattern}}
Desired effect: {{effect}}

Line length effects:

**Short lines:** Slow reader, emphasize each word, create breath
**Long lines:** Build momentum, suggest overflow, challenge breath
**Mixed lengths:** Create visual interest, rhythmic variety
**Gradually changing:** Build or release tension
**Sudden shifts:** Create surprise or emphasis

Analysis:
1. Map current line lengths in syllables
2. Identify where length serves/hinders meaning
3. Find opportunities for strategic variation
4. Consider visual shape on page

Provide revised version with intentional line length design.

Annotate the effect of each length choice.