Collaboration Pitch Review Panel

Review this collaboration pitch from multiple recipient perspectives:

Pitch:
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Target creator: {{target}}
Collaboration proposal: {{proposal}}

**Recipient Mindset 1: Busy Creator**
Receives 50+ pitches per week.
- First impression in 5 seconds?
- Would they read the full pitch?
- What"s missing that they need?

**Recipient Mindset 2: Strategic Thinker**
Evaluates partnerships carefully.
- Is the value proposition clear?
- What risks do they see?
- What questions would they ask?

**Recipient Mindset 3: Creative Partner**
Excited about good collaboration ideas.
- Is the creative concept exciting?
- Would this be fun to make?
- Does it feel like a partnership or an ask?

**Pitch Optimization**
- Common concerns across all perspectives
- Revised pitch addressing all feedback
- Subject line recommendations