Syllable Economy Drill

Reduce my poem to maximum impact with minimum syllables.

Original poem:
{{poem}}

Target reduction: {{percentage}}% fewer syllables

Economy principles:
- Every syllable must earn its place
- Prefer strong verbs over verb + adverb
- Prefer concrete nouns over adjective + noun
- Cut filler words (very, really, just, that)
- Replace phrases with single words when possible
- Trust the reader to infer

Provide:
1. Syllable count of original
2. Line-by-line compression with choices explained
3. Final compressed version with syllable count
4. Comparison: what was lost? what was gained?

The poem should feel denser, not thinner.