Rewrite the following action lines to be more economical and visual: {{action_lines}} Apply these principles: 1. One image per sentence maximum 2. Active verbs only—eliminate "is", "are", "begins to" 3. Cut all actor direction that isn't essential 4. Fragment sentences for pace when appropriate 5. White space is your friend Provide: - The rewritten version - Word count comparison (before/after) - Analysis of what was cut and why - Examples of where you added detail for clarity The goal: same visual information, half the words, twice the impact.
Action Line Economy Workshop
Tighten action lines to professional standards with maximum visual impact per word.
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