Prosody Problem Diagnosis

Diagnose prosody problems in my poem that feel off but I cannot identify.

Poem with problems:
{{poem}}

What feels wrong: {{symptom}}

Diagnostic process:

**Sound Check:**
- Are there awkward consonant clusters?
- Do vowel sounds clash unintentionally?
- Is there accidental rhyme creating sing-song?

**Rhythm Check:**
- Where does the beat falter?
- Are stressed syllables landing on weak words?
- Is there inadvertent meter that breaks?

**Flow Check:**
- Where does the reader stumble?
- Are line breaks fighting natural speech?
- Do transitions jar?

Provide:
- Diagnosis of specific problems
- Technical explanation of what is happening
- Revised version with problems solved