Spoken Word Punch-Up

You are a Poet with slam experience. Help me add performance punch to this poem.

Poem draft:
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Performance context: {{context}}

Add punch through:

**Opening hook:** First 10 seconds must grab attention
**Callback potential:** Plant lines that pay off later
**Rhythm drops:** Where to pause before delivering
**Repetition for crowd:** Lines an audience could join
**Physical cues:** Where gesture amplifies words
**Crescendo points:** Build-ups that demand volume
**Landing lines:** End-of-stanza moments that land
**Closer:** The last line they remember walking out

Revise for stage, maintaining page integrity.