Line Break Decision Framework

Analyze my poem draft and suggest optimal line breaks.

Poem draft:
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Intended pacing: {{pacing}}
Emotional arc: {{arc}}

For each stanza, explain:
1. Where to break for breath and pause
2. How enjambment could create tension or surprise
3. Which words should land at line endings for emphasis
4. The rhythmic effect of your suggested breaks

Provide two versions: one with traditional breaks, one experimental.