Analyze and optimize the pacing of this scene: {{scene}} PACING ANALYSIS: 1. BEAT MAPPING - Identify each beat with timestamps (page/eighth) - Label beat type (action, reaction, information, transition) 2. RHYTHM CHART - Graph emotional intensity across the scene - Mark peaks and valleys 3. PACE DIAGNOSIS - Where does the scene drag? - Where does it rush past important moments? - Are tension builds and releases balanced? 4. LINE-LEVEL ANALYSIS - Flag overwritten action lines (slow pace) - Flag underwritten emotional moments (rushed) 5. REWRITE - Revised scene with optimized pacing - Use white space, sentence length, and beat placement strategically Compare before/after page counts and emotional impact.
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Diagnose and optimize scene pacing through systematic beat analysis and rhythm charting.
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