Musicality Without Rhyme

Create musicality in my poem without relying on end rhyme.

Poem draft:
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Desired music: {{music}}

Non-rhyme musicality:

1. **Internal sound patterns:** Assonance, consonance within lines
2. **Rhythm and meter:** Beat patterns, stress music
3. **Repetition:** Words, phrases, structures that recur
4. **Vowel melodies:** Long vs. short vowel sequences
5. **Pace variation:** Fast and slow passages
6. **Silence:** Strategic pauses as part of the music

Audit current draft for:
- Where music is already working
- Where sound patterns could strengthen
- Where rhythm is interesting or flat

Revise to maximize musicality without adding end rhyme.

Annotate the sonic techniques at work.