Rewrite this dialogue scene eliminating 75% of the spoken lines: {{dialogue_scene}} Rules: - Keep only lines that absolutely cannot be shown through action - Replace every cut line with specific physical behavior - The emotional content must remain identical - Subtext must become more visible through behavior Provide: 1. ANALYSIS - Which lines convey information that requires speech? - Which lines convey emotion that can be shown? - Which lines exist only to fill space? 2. ACTION TRANSLATIONS - For each cut line, the behavior that replaces it 3. REWRITTEN SCENE - Full screenplay format with new action/dialogue balance 4. COMPARISON - Original line count vs. new line count - What changed emotionally? - What became clearer or more ambiguous?
Dialogue Through Action Exercise
Transform dialogue-heavy scenes into visually-driven storytelling through action replacement.
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