Dialogue Information Balance

Balance information delivery in this dialogue:

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Information Balance Analysis:

1. INFORMATION INVENTORY
- List each piece of information delivered
- Categorize: Plot / Character / World / Backstory

2. DELIVERY METHOD AUDIT
- Is each piece shown or told?
- Could any told information be shown?
- Is any shown information too obscure?

3. DENSITY ANALYSIS
- How much information per page?
- Where is it too dense?
- Where could more be conveyed?

4. CHARACTER-APPROPRIATE DELIVERY
- Does each character share information believably?
- No character should know everything
- Information should cost something to share

5. BALANCE PRINCIPLES
- Information should serve scene conflict
- Revelation should shift power or knowledge
- Some information should be withheld

6. REBALANCED DIALOGUE
- Rewrite with better information distribution
- Ensure dialogue serves story, not just data delivery