Audit my poem for abstract vs. concrete language. Poem text: {{poem_text}} Create two columns: **Abstract words:** (love, pain, beauty, truth, etc.) List every abstract noun, adjective, or concept **Concrete images:** (red door, broken glass, salt on tongue) List every specific, sensory detail Ratio analysis: What percentage is abstract vs. concrete? For each abstract word, suggest: - A concrete image that embodies it - A physical action that demonstrates it - A sensory detail that evokes it Revise the poem to increase concrete specificity. Target: 80% concrete, 20% abstract maximum.
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