Revision Round Planning

Plan a systematic revision process for my poem.

Current draft:
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Known issues: {{issues}}

Revision rounds:

**Round 1 - Macro Structure:**
- Is the arc working?
- Are sections in right order?
- What needs cutting or expanding?

**Round 2 - Line Level:**
- Line breaks serving the poem?
- Enjambment choices intentional?
- Line lengths varied appropriately?

**Round 3 - Word Level:**
- Every word earning its place?
- Precision of vocabulary?
- Cliche or weak words?

**Round 4 - Sound:**
- Reading aloud - what stumbles?
- Sound patterns working?
- Rhythm effective?

Provide a specific revision plan with action items for each round.