Apply multiple revision lenses to strengthen my poem draft. Poem draft: {{poem_draft}} Let me examine this through different lenses, one at a time: **Lens 1 - Sound:** Read aloud. Where does the mouth stumble? Where is sonic pleasure? **Lens 2 - Image:** Which images are vivid? Which are vague or abstract? **Lens 3 - Emotion:** Where do I feel something? Where am I told instead of shown? **Lens 4 - Economy:** Which words earn their place? Which are filler? **Lens 5 - Surprise:** Where does the poem take an unexpected turn? Where is it predictable? Provide specific revision suggestions for each lens.
Revision Lens Framework
Multi-perspective revision methodology for systematic poem strengthening.
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