Revision Lens Framework

Apply multiple revision lenses to strengthen my poem draft.

Poem draft:
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Let me examine this through different lenses, one at a time:

**Lens 1 - Sound:** Read aloud. Where does the mouth stumble? Where is sonic pleasure?

**Lens 2 - Image:** Which images are vivid? Which are vague or abstract?

**Lens 3 - Emotion:** Where do I feel something? Where am I told instead of shown?

**Lens 4 - Economy:** Which words earn their place? Which are filler?

**Lens 5 - Surprise:** Where does the poem take an unexpected turn? Where is it predictable?

Provide specific revision suggestions for each lens.